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Original: 2/29/2008 11:49 PM
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Friday, February 29, 2008

Soldier

 Rocks cast skyward as peace becomes panic;voices shift to tears

Yet I am disconnected

I am a soldier; I have been shot


The motion around me is slow;I can't seem to join it's capricious movement

My vision blurs as pain hits

I am a soldier; I have been shot


Open Mouths, blazing guns, flying bullets and erupting fires

The ground becomes a sandy pillow

I am a soldier; I have been shot


Feet pass overhead in a flurry spinning in circles of time

The sky, my eye candy canvas, my only hope for home and love and peace, is blackened as the sun seems to die

I was a soldier; I had been shot

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this poem has more than one meaning to me, great selection of words to express the meaning behind them.
Posted 2/29/2008 11:55 PM by roberttthaha - reply


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